Sumi swings the teapot back and forth, fidgeting
uncomfortably.
SUMI (CONT'D)
He was never the same after we lost
her. He didn't like being around
me, I reminded him of her too much.
It got to a point where my voice
would trigger him.
FRANKLIN
That's a problem. I can-
As Franklin walks past her, determined to confront Goh, this
time Sumi grabs him by the wrist. He turns around to face
her. Sumi's sleeve slides down her arm revealing a bruise,
Franklin notices it.
SUMI
It's not your problem.
He hesitates but shakes her off and continues to storm back
towards Goh.
SUMI (CONT'D)
Please stop! You don't
understand... You'll upset him, and
I don't like it when he's like
that.
GUARDIAN ANGEL
Listen to the kid Franklin.
Franklin freezes in his tracks at the sound of the angels
voice. He turns around to look at Sumi and sees the angels
arms around her; comforting her as she cries.
He watches in disbelief, unable to understand why the angel
would side with her in this situation.
Franklin reluctantly starts heading back towards Sumi and
kneels in front of her.
FRANKLIN
Okay... stop crying. I won't tell
Goh.
SUMI (still crying)
You promise?
FRANKLIN
Yes... It'll be our little secret.
Sumi wipes her tears away and holds up a pinkie. Franklin
rolls his eyes and interlocks his pinkie with hers to seal
the deal.
CUT TO:
EXT. RURAL HILLSIDE TOWN - DAY
Sumi and Franklin enters the area where Goh has started a
fire. Sumi hands the pot of berries over to Goh and sits
beside him. Goh notices her red eyes and the sting on her
neck. Franklin sits across from them, avoiding Goh's stare.
GOH
What happened out there?
FRANKLIN
Ran into some bees. I got the brute
of it and was so busy running away
that we got separated. By the time
I found Sumi she seemed to have
gotten over her sting.
GOH
You don't look too bad.
FRANKLIN
I've always been mild to their
stings.
Goh nods and starts eating.
GOH
Thank you for the food.
FRANKLIN
We really should have packed some.
GOH
Well we wouldn't have room for the
perfect tea that alleviates bee
venom.
Goh finishes the berries and starts brewing the tea he was
speaking of. Each nervous glance that Franklin throws towards
Sumi does not go unnoticed as Goh studies his behavior.
GOH (CONT'D)
Tell me about your wife.
Franklin flinches, startled by the sudden question.
FRANKLIN
What uhh... what do you want to
know?
The tea finishes brewing and Goh pours out a cup, handing it
to Franklin.
FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
Oh no thanks I didn't get st-
He stops and catches himself, grabs the tea and brings it to
his lips. He glares at Goh while he takes a sip, mad at
himself for letting his guard down.
FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
I didn't swell as much as Sumi did,
you should've given her the first
cup.
Goh chuckles.
GOH
Sumi is a tough child. Her mother
raised her well. You are our guest,
she is patient enough to wait.
Goh pats her head as Sumi and Franklin exchange a nervous
glance.
FRANKLIN
Tell me... about your wife.
Goh's expression changes quickly to a grim one.
GOH
She was just like my daughter.
Quiet. Patient. Loving. It's such a
blessing to have Sumi around. At
times I feel she is a gift left
behind by my wife to remember her
by.
Franklin clenches his fist and begins to rise.
GUARDIAN ANGEL
Shhhhh
The guardian angel appears behind both Goh and Sumi, a finger
pressed against his lips, shaking his head with a look of
danger in his eyes.
Franklin unclenches his fist and hands his empty tea cup to
Goh, asking for another serving.
Goh pours him one with a smile on his face. They hold each
other's gaze, Franklin's with open malice, and Goh's with a
hidden one.
GOH
And your wife?
Franklin sips his tea and takes him time before he answers.
FRANKLIN
She was very... different. Always
wanted to do things another way.
Goh nods.
GOH
It can be difficult... not having a
supportive wife.
FRANKLIN
She wanted me to stay. She never
wanted me to join the war.
Franklin fidgets with his ring.
FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
I never listened. All of her
warnings fell on deaf ears. Her
concerns were mute to me.
Franklin glances at Sumi. Goh leans forward, pouring the last
bit of tea left in the pot into Franklin's cup, filling it up
a third time.
GOH
Was she right?
Franklin shakes his head. He shrugs. He looks away towards
the sky. A tear trickles down his face. He flinches and
reaches up to catch the tear on his cheek.
He lets out a sorrowful chuckle, surprised at his own
reaction to the question.
He looks back at Goh and nods.
FRANKLIN
I think so.
Beat.
The sun is setting. A flare erupts close by, lighting up the
sky. All three of them watch it in horror.
In the distance you can hear marching, and a song being sung
by numerous men.
GOH
What are they doing this far away
from the city?
FRANKLIN
I know that song. It's the SS
battalion. Likely my fleet chasing
deserters. My commander is
notorious for hunting them down.
Franklin starts packing things up frantically.
FRANKLIN (CONT'D)
We need to move. If they find me
here, I'm dead. There should be a
church somewhere deeper into the
mountains where we could find
refuge. It's just over the hill
there-
Franklin's voice trails off. His vision grows dim, his
movements sluggish. He shakes his head, trying to fight it
off, confused by the sudden fatigue that is setting in.
He notices Goh's tea cup is untouched, still full. Sumi never
received one.
He slumps to the ground, growing weaker, and glares up at
Goh.
GOH
My wife and I didn't pay any mind
to the war... until the war came to
us. It took everything away from
us. My legs. My wife. My daughter's
laughter.
Franklin grunts as he tries to crawl away. He throws a
hateful glance at Sumi, she looks away.
Goh stands up from his wheelchair and picks Franklin up over
his shoulder.
GOH (CONT'D)
Don't worry, we're not going to
leave you. We'll find that church,
and talk when you wake up.
Franklin groans as his vision fades rapidly and the voices
start to slur. The last thing he sees is Sumi shoving the
wheelchair into the fire, and Goh grabbing the bag.
FADE TO:
INT. PLANE - DAY
Franklin is inside a fighter jett, piloting it. The sun is
setting on a war torn city with smoke still rising from the
bombs he had just dropped. Two other planes fly beside him on
either side.
We see an establishing shot of all three flying together,
over the view of the demolished city. From a low angle we
hear the cries and screams of the injured. From a high angle
we hear the jets engines.
ARMIN (crackling of the comms)
Another one down boys, what'd I
tell ya? We're crushing it!
FINN
I'm so glad they didn't put us in
the infantry. The view from up here
of us winning the war is just
priceless.
Finn is looking at the clouds and the beautiful sunset.
Franklin looks to the city below. He hangs his head in guilt
but looks to a photo of his wife on the dash of his pilot
controls.
He briefly touches it, shakes his head, and looks straight
ahead into the beautiful view of the sunset.
Beat.
FRANKLIN
I can't wait for the war to be
over...
FINN (Whispering over the comms)
Franklin! You said that over the
main line! The commander heard it!
Franklin panics and anxiously awaits the response.
COMMANDER
You got someone special back home
waiting for you?
FRANKLIN
Yes... A wife.
COMMANDER
Good. That's why you're here.
That's why we're all here. Good
work out there. Now get back safe
and stop spewing your feelings over
the main comms.
Everyone laughs. Franklin still looks uneasy. He glances down
at the city and back up at his wife's photo.
FINN
I got more than a wife waiting for
me. I hope my bar is okay, I heard
we got bombed there a week ago.
FRANKLIN
Wait what! Who told you that?
ARMIN
We all got a letter. My wife
wouldn't stop nagging about having
to take care of the kids on her
own, like damn woman I got a war to
fight and you're really talkin...
FRANKLIN
Hold up, you guys got a letter?
There's laughter over the comms. Franklin doesn't find this
funny, he's confused and nervous.
FINN
Wow the irony of the the mailman
between us not receiving his
letter.
FRANKLIN
Ha ha. Is everyone okay?
ARMIN
Yeah, It sounds like everyone got
underground before it happened.
Franklin looks at his wife's photo and back at the city
again.
Create a visual juxtaposition with a series of shots of the
war torn city, the image of his wife, and the guilt he feels
for taking many civilians lives that could be affected just
like his own.
We see a missile flying behind one of the planes. A loud
explosion erupts as it collides. An alarm sounds in the comms
and we hear cries of Armin. His plane starts to plummet at
rapid speed.
FRANKLIN
Noooo! Armin!
FINN
Franklin focus! We have to find out
where that shot came from. Tell me
what you see...
The sounds fade as Franklin watches the flaming plane descend
below the clouds.
FADE TO:
INT. CHURCH - NIGHT
Close up shot of the corner of Franklin's wife's photo
peaking out of his breast pocket.
Franklin wakes up laying in a pew. Heavenly organ music is
playing. POV shot as he survey's the colored glass windows
around him and the beautiful architecture.
Franklin smiles, drinking in the beauty, blissful in this
serene moment, as the lights reflect off of Jesus on the
glass stains.
His vision lands on the guardian angle, sitting on top of the
pulpit. His smile fades and a frown grows.
GUARDIAN ANGEL
Wakey wakey sleepy head.
FRANKLIN
What happened to being on vacation?
GUARDIAN ANGEL
I am on vacation. You don't see me
working do you?
The angel floats over to Franklin, sits beside him and pats
him on his shoulder.
GUARDIAN ANGEL (CONT'D)
I have faith that you won't leave
these people and kill yourself; and
if you're not going to kill
yourself I'm really just here to
enjoy the show.
FRANKLIN
The show?
GUARDIAN ANGEL
Yeah, last night really was
something. You should've seen what
happened after you went
unconscious.
A realization occurs to Franklin as he studies the area.
FRANKLIN
Where are they?
BACH
Don't you mean who are they?
A middle aged priest with a scruffy beard and long greasy
hair is sitting at the organ, still playing the heavenly
music. When Franklin meets his eyes he notices they are a
faded grey. The man is blind.
BACH (CONT'D)
Typically you try to get to know
someone before you readily trust
them. I think you made the wrong
call on trying to help these people
Franklin.
Franklin gets up from the pew and slowly approaches the blind
priest.
FRANKLIN
How are you doing that?
BACH
Doing what?
FRANKLIN
Playing the organ.
BACH
I can blindly play music because
I've practiced. I'm familiar with
the keys. How can you blindly trust
your new friends when you aren't
familiar with them?
Franklin looks away and back at the pew he came from. The
angel is gone. He shakes his head.
FRANKLIN
They're not my friends. You're
right, I don't know them at all;
but I don't have to. I only need
them to lead me somewhere.
BACH
Ahhh yes... the witch doctor. They
might have betrayed your trust but
they did save you last night.
FRANKLIN
Yeah... They're a peculiar pair.
What do you know about them?
BACH
Only that they are not who they
were. The old man and his wife used
to attend here regularly. When Sumi
came along they were the most
beaming little family.
The heavenly music changes to a minor key, sounding sinister
and bleak.
BACH (CONT'D)
Then the confessions came.
The blind priest manically rocks back and forth as he
ferociously plays a climactic portion of the song.
BACH (CONT'D)
Goh started selling more than tea
at his struggling shop. Japanese
tea was foreign to the area, he was
foreign, and to feed his family he
fed the streets the eastern poison
they craved.
The music settles down and the priest looks up at franklin.
BACH (CONT'D)
When he saw the addicts pile up in
the streets he felt guilty. I was
his therapist.
Franklin nods awkwardly.
FRANKLIN
Well, you don't ever have to worry
about being my therapist father.
Bach shakes his head. Franklin gives a questioning look. The
sound of a pot falling on the ground is heard in the
distance.
Franklin looks in that direction and a dim light is shown in
one of the side rooms.
He rushes towards that direction and Bach follows behind with
his walking stick.
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