VERY INTERESTING. THE STORY ITSELF FLOWS SO WELL đ
THAT I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAP. 3âș
Form a foster home to the biological mother.
Then the story begins in a super manner in chapter 2.
THRILLER HOUSE AND ALL THAT STUFF.
IT JUST GETS JUICY AND EXCITINGđ
WHAT'S NEXT?
CAN'T WAIT!
SOSO EAGER.
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MY FIRST BOOK EVER.
I'M GENEVIEVE AND I'VE PUBLISHED MY LATEST CHAPTER (4th chapter) JUST RECENTLY.
COMMENT WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS BOOK AND WHAT CONTENT YOU THINK I SHOULD ADD TO MAKE IT EVEN juicier!
TODDLES!
Writing quality----------4.5
Stability of updates----------3.6
Story Development----------4.8
Character Design----------5
World Background----------4.8
Very interesting storyline. Though I can't say much about the character development since it's still on chapter 3 but I hope the author continues his\her great work.
The author has a nice writing style and the story flows smoothly. With 2 chaps only- can't comment on it much but this looks like it has good potential.
Looking forward to the next chap author
Me rating my first novel after peoples vote!
Writing quality = 89%
Updates stability = 77%
Story development = 92%
Character design = 98%
World background = 98%
TOTAL VOTE% = 454 = 4.4
Good writing and composition. Character development, Story background and the writing quality itself are all super good
I eagerly wait for the next chapter soon.