Genevieve7Star
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Genevieve7Star2yrCommentedI have just realized that I've used the first numeric symbol in my entire writing!
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How is this start for a novel?
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Why's there an extra 1?
The library was not very old, just about 20-30 years he guessed. There were many books from fantasy novels to scientific theories and the books looked like they were cared for deeply. He noticed that there were four windows, facing all four directions and a desk with few newspapers in it. He took some of the books out and checked their publish date, they were all before 2021. - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
SMELL LIKE LITERALLY SMELL LIKE! DO WE HUMAN BEINGS ALSO HAVE OUR SCENT?
"You smell like Liam", the unknown man replied. - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
Yeah. "We can always get the money back." Only a 2 year old would believe that after being told multiple times; without it being refunded
"We can always earn the money back" - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
10 YRS? I hardly put up in one apartment for two years!
Ryan had been Liam's next-door neighbour for 10 years. They sometimes even had dinner together, but today was not one of those days. The atmosphere in Ryan's house was tense, Ryan without enquiring about it knew the reason for it, his father was cheated out of money again. This has been going on all his life. - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
I'd honestly be
"Yes yes" - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
more like: This is what Ryan really meant, HE WAS EVEN SURE!
"I am sure the disciplinary teacher had a fight with his wife back home and is taking it out on me, Liam", Ryan wailed. - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
So they're either kids/teens
As he came closer, he could see that it was a man who was older than him but relatively younger than an adult based on his build. - Genevieve7Star2yrCommented
I'm also re-reading it for the fourth time
"What the hell are these? These things are not simple carnivores" - Genevieve7Star2yrCommentedCh 4 ~ESCAPEE'S ATTEMPT.
- Genevieve7Star2yrReplied to Genevieve7StarCh 3 SHE'S JUST TOO CURIOUS.
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- Genevieve7Star2yrPosted
I'm writing this review according to the first five chapters but I shall still continue to read the rest of the chapters. The author has a very deep, knowledgeable and wide imagination that led to the writing of this story. It's one of a kind. Magic Realism- I'd say. It's indeed: ~A beautifully crafted story ~Exceptionally good ~Extremely interesting ~Thrilling, captivating & brilliant. The writing was just but totally captivating. Good work author,