Reviews of Youjo Senki: Valhalla

The author here, just wants to clarify something about the story. This fanfiction isn't set in the universe of Youjo Senki. The only things similar will be the character and the existence of mage. Basically, see this as a historical fiction in 1914 with Mage and Tanya inside. It will more resemble our world history in real life, involving French, UK, Russia and United states. Will there be romance? Maybe, maybe not, but it won't be the focus. And...that's all I think? Ask me questions here if you have any. Not a Native English-speaker so don't expect much from grammar, suggestions are always welcome. Lastly, hope you enjoy this book :)

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Pretty solid if you ask me, start is good , mc seems ok , grammar is nice. Everything is going pretty smoothly. advice to author : Please mention whose POV it makes it easier to understand. Also can you use the names of places as in anime, it gets kinda tough to understand who is fighting who, or make a glossary giving some starting details. Other than this it's great.

Good fanfic, hope you won't bring it down writer ..............................................................................................................................................

this is a great start of the novel (currently only 4ch) if it continues like this I can see it gaining popularity its also a great representation of youjo senki so far the mc even if he seems kinda like a wimp actually isnt annoying but completely justified hes not some angsty teenager after a harem but a history teacher thrust into the middle of WW1 and it seems very authentic

Its good. I don't know what else to tell you, my favorite food is fried rice, my favorite thing to do is read novels and fanfics, Do you also pee while you sh*t?, I am writing this at 5AM, I should probably sleep.

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Shouldn't give a five-star review without reading the story. But as there isn't a harem, and is based on Youjou Senki but with our world history of WW1 I think it's will be Magnifique. I don't know what to say anymore, but hopefully will be good as I think will be.

Adoro Youjo Senki, sendo assim achei a novel excelente por ser uma fanfic desse anime porém só não espero que o protagonista seja um soldado a fanfic toda......

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it is honestly pretty good not gonna lie I'm really interested in it because its a youjo senki fanfic hopefully it isn't dropped by the author I'm still waiting for another update hopefully it will come but yeah pretty good so far

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