Review Detail of Paper_plane in Youjo Senki: Valhalla

Pretty solid if you ask me, start is good , mc seems ok , grammar is nice. Everything is going pretty smoothly. advice to author : Please mention whose POV it makes it easier to understand. Also can you use the names of places as in anime, it gets kinda tough to understand who is fighting who, or make a glossary giving some starting details. Other than this it's great.