she_osprey
This is after reading chapter one. The writing is great, it's not perfect but no one is, no problem staying immersed in the story. The only noticeable problem I could cast is that the time it takes to explain that the MC is a thief. That can be considered bad on almost any format but this site. That's gaming the system and I can't take points off for that. If the tags are something you like then give it a shot.
I love reading werewolf stories!! Definitely added this to my library already!!! From the usual recommendations, I always recommend checking your grammar. All authors struggle with this, especially on here, so I would like to recommend that. I love the storyline, and how it keeps developing. Very engaging and I love the world background you have built!!!! I also love the character Rhian. Sorry I can't spell names right lol!!! Good luck author!! Happy Writing!!! I do want to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!! Brilliant work author!!!
Wow this is a rollercoaster of a story! The drama! The tensions! Where do I even begin? I absolutely loved how the book started, it drew me in from the moment I started reading. Great range of vocabulary in accompanyment with some quality descriptive skills made this novel emotive and compelling. I really felt for the characters, their emotions and turmoils, while also being immersed in the plot. (Also Carl. Just Carl. I love him) Superb work author!