This is after reading chapter one. The writing is great, it's not perfect but no one is, no problem staying immersed in the story. The only noticeable problem I could cast is that the time it takes to explain that the MC is a thief. That can be considered bad on almost any format but this site. That's gaming the system and I can't take points off for that. If the tags are something you like then give it a shot.
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