Dragoneel22
Although this is a fanfic, it's really well written, the chapters are big and are comparable to a real book chapter. The story is good, lettibg the author exprim his own idea and making them blend into the world of my hero academia with Izuku as a main character, letting us experiment the viciousness of a world where everything became white or black for civilians with the rise of the age of heroes. Thank you for this story, I love it and it's absolutely magnificient !!
An amazing fan fic. This has a very believable and intresting main character, that actually uses his brain to achieve his goals. The story has been very natural and enjoyable to follow along through, while making the main charcter likeable. This is honestly an excellent story so far, and while the main character can be considered OP or at the very least strong, it’s done in an excellent and realistic way. I believe that this story deserves more readers, and I know at some point it will blow up. 10/10
So, first time writing a review but I felt like this one deserved it. I binge read all chapters until now, thanks by the way, didn't do my assignement due to that. Anyway to those looking for a good fanfic, you have One here, the character background is quite well thought. The world seem to be almost the same as canon but I have no need to read about I do not know in a fanfic. The story is evolving at a moderate pace and I hope it stays the same. For the writing quality, I saw few mistakes, none creating a comprehension issue. And seeing that for now the pace is quite fast, I can only congratulate the Author. Don't burn yourself out wanting to write too fast and having to drop it. Keep going.
I have literally no idea why this isn't more popular, it's super well written and emotionally captivating. Long chapters, zero typos and super clean writing. It's basically a super realistic take on what if "Izuku" actually had a tough uprising (not the bakugo drama) A fresh way to explain the characters, none of them presented blandly, everyone has a personality. All I can say about this novel, it's gold, and the best fanfic of MHA I have ever read. Too bad you have to go to archiveofourown, to be able to read up to chapter 59, Ps If you are looking for no goody two shoes mc this is it, there's a slight superhero complex, but he never bends to not do what is necessary.
Writing Quality (5)- Its good there are no typos that is usually seen in most fanfic. There are spelling mistakes as far as I read, there are grammatical mistake in any paragraphs that I read. Pacing(4)- its steady the transition between situations are satisfactory. I would hold back a one star for the improvement. Story Development (5)- The story is good. There are really no mistakes that I can see. Character design (5)-now the MC is mature but we can see some of his immaturity in controlling his emotion. That what I like because we can see that that MC personality can be more improved as his life goes on. The side character has a personality. The conversation is not robotlike and that is good. Updating Stability (4)- its good World background (4)- Well you add some things to it so yah. Overall-4.6 The story is good and I like it...