Review Detail of 0K0 in What's in a Quirk?

Writing Quality (5)- Its good there are no typos that is usually seen in most fanfic. There are spelling mistakes as far as I read, there are grammatical mistake in any paragraphs that I read. Pacing(4)- its steady the transition between situations are satisfactory. I would hold back a one star for the improvement. Story Development (5)- The story is good. There are really no mistakes that I can see. Character design (5)-now the MC is mature but we can see some of his immaturity in controlling his emotion. That what I like because we can see that that MC personality can be more improved as his life goes on. The side character has a personality. The conversation is not robotlike and that is good. Updating Stability (4)- its good World background (4)- Well you add some things to it so yah. Overall-4.6 The story is good and I like it...