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Reviews of Unstable World

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Unstable World

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JP_TransLaLa
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Now this is how your start out a webnovel with a reincarnation storyline. This one is going into the library so I can catch it as it updates. Get ready for an action-packed story!

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Dunge
DungeLv3Dunge

Finally!! There is a Reincarnation story with legit good writing!! The first couple of story is perfect!! No info dump!! Actually interesting conversation and action of the character while in dialog!! I even don't know she the main char is but boi I was there for a couple of chapters reading this with excitement!! Now it's up to the author for the proper explanation of why is the main lead die with who knows and what will go turn into what!? but that is coverable later in the story, I don't mind it was unexplainable too but some of the readers other than me might be wondering. and I really like the Deity personality That's it, kudos for the author!! keep writing!! and start your fantastic beginning with a meaningful journey!! This story is recommended!! See the first paragraph!! You're welcome~

heyimliane
heyimlianeLv2heyimliane

It’s really nice! The updates are stable, the chapters have the right amount of words and it only has few minor errors and needs more description to the background, but overall > I love fantasy and I think this novel has a LOT of potential and I love the character names especially Garrett :0

Ysabel_xox
Ysabel_xoxLv4Ysabel_xox

Damn! What an interesting story! The first chapter hooked me. Everything that is in here is so fascinating. I love how the characters interact with each other and how they cope with the world. Good job author! πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bexonwx
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chayasreedeka
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I could binge read this book all day .. Author awesome....u did ur job.....n ppl read this book... Highly Recommended πŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’›πŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’›πŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’š

Oemar_danoes
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The book is magnificent, has a great storyline and fabulous character development, it's pure and tricky sometimes. I can actually admit to other columns that you need to investigate the atmosphere more, deliver more development, and also give a more personality improvement, for some reason I felt that the story was small abstinence. that's why you can't contribute more innumerable character community between the chapter, but I suppose you can create some in eternity so that we can manipulate the characters exceeding.

Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_darkLv4Dawn_in_dark

Very nice novel. I found this novel very interesting. Dear author, we expect for your regular updates with new chapters. Keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thump's up. I'll heartly recommend this novel to those who are in fantasy novel.

bibiyenini
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SSKV_R3D
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The book is great, has great storyline and great character development, it's simple yet intriguing sometimes. I can actually agree to other reviews that you need to explore the world more, give more life and also give a more character development, for some reason I felt that the story was a little fast that's why you can't fit more character development between the chapter, but I hope you can make some in the future so that we can feel the characters more

The_Procrastinator
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SamsaraWithWords
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I appreciate a novel where the protagonist doesn't get everything thrown at him. Challenges, struggles, and exploration of a fantasy world...I want more of that!

bananmilk
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varean
vareanLv2varean

This is a superb novel. It's unlike any reincarnation that I've read, it's really good. Better than any similar books I've read. I only read the first few chapters and it's intriguing, makes me want to keep reading. Your writing is really descriptive which is commendable. I actually learned a thing or two from your writing. There's really nothing bad I can say it's a wonderful piece of work. Keep it up!