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Finally!! There is a Reincarnation story with legit good writing!! The first couple of story is perfect!! No info dump!! Actually interesting conversation and action of the character while in dialog!! I even don't know she the main char is but boi I was there for a couple of chapters reading this with excitement!! Now it's up to the author for the proper explanation of why is the main lead die with who knows and what will go turn into what!? but that is coverable later in the story, I don't mind it was unexplainable too but some of the readers other than me might be wondering. and I really like the Deity personality That's it, kudos for the author!! keep writing!! and start your fantastic beginning with a meaningful journey!! This story is recommended!! See the first paragraph!! You're welcome~
The book is magnificent, has a great storyline and fabulous character development, it's pure and tricky sometimes. I can actually admit to other columns that you need to investigate the atmosphere more, deliver more development, and also give a more personality improvement, for some reason I felt that the story was small abstinence. that's why you can't contribute more innumerable character community between the chapter, but I suppose you can create some in eternity so that we can manipulate the characters exceeding.
The book is great, has great storyline and great character development, it's simple yet intriguing sometimes. I can actually agree to other reviews that you need to explore the world more, give more life and also give a more character development, for some reason I felt that the story was a little fast that's why you can't fit more character development between the chapter, but I hope you can make some in the future so that we can feel the characters more
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This is a superb novel. It's unlike any reincarnation that I've read, it's really good. Better than any similar books I've read. I only read the first few chapters and it's intriguing, makes me want to keep reading. Your writing is really descriptive which is commendable. I actually learned a thing or two from your writing. There's really nothing bad I can say it's a wonderful piece of work. Keep it up!