ExSoldierLv99
I personally recomend this novel to anyone who like the fantasy + game elements genre along with an original story. The background is really original even if from time to time (rarely), some elements make me think of Everyone Else is a Returnee from Toycar (a book I also recomend). The character development can sometime be a bit weird but also give a bit of "unknown" to the future of the story, which I personally liked. Anyway, from begining to end I enjoyed reading this story, so I invite anyone reading this review to take a peek to, at least, the first 20 chapters and see if you like it.
Good and fast paced action plot. Though I feel MC is overworked....lol. But all in all love the novel. Love its originality. Keep up the good work. Oh and please update the status menu of MC, organize it, fuse/merge some skills to make the list shorter... What am I rambling on about. I would give it a 5 star rating except I don't want the others to feel jealous. Lol... Can't wait for the updates.
First I'm going to say my grade for this webnovel which is 7. The second thing I'm going to comment is that what I believe will disturb or help someone to like this webnovel, first if you like MC who is villain and doesn't care about anyone , don't read it, if you like a slightly anti-hero or hero feel, well, but know that he will have very silly and meaningless moral limits, and at first he is quite a hero, then he will break some of these '' moral limits'', the second thing is, do you like tragic history? No, then don't read it, don't even waste your time, if you like it then the story might be good for you; Third thing is, are you looking for a webnovel that has a romantic relationship with the MC, which is nice and healthy? No, then that's fine, if so don't waste your time, if for you it doesn't matter it can be good but it will depend, since the MC's love relationship is very bad; The fourth thing is, if you like MC who are ''lone wolf'', if so then this might be a good read. The fifth thing is can you stand some numerical errors in the webnovel system? If not then better leave this work for later, finally if you like a good long training arc without much time skip and you did well in other things this work can be very good for you.
Great story. By the end I felt that everything had truly come together. I really liked the 'stranded on an island' theme that kept reappearing throughout. Over the course of the whole novel you could really feel the struggle, and that until the very end, in his mind he never really left that desert island. Phenomenal read, 100% recommended.
This is a really great novel. The adventures of Leon is really awesome. The story is really great. The story tells us to never give up no matter how impossible the task is, how unclear the path is, and how great the challenges. Because in the end will always get what we want and what we deserve, we just need to continue and never give up. Thanks author for the great story. Really thank you.
The major flaw of the main character here is that he has no "boundless" type ambition, he is just living for revenge, which makes the drive of the story slow as heck, Furthermore, the novel doesn't have titles, its almost impossible to navigate, its just like reading a long-ass story that was cut by chapters.
I wonder why i never give proper reviews for anything above stars.. 🤔 Well it doesn't matter. One of the reasons i stopped reading comments was because i find something good but then other people are like "no, thats bad and here is a 300 wprd paragraph of why it is bad" And then i realized, what i read is actually trash. So then I decided to ignore most comments! But i can never do that. °-°
Story is a mess. Forced japan arc, hundreds of repetetive training chapters. MC is way dumber than your average 14yo shonen protagonist. Time after time he wastes opportunities because of random suspicions and laughable morals, and it always ends in him/his friends suffering, but he will never learn, because his IQ is barely surpass single digits
It had a lot of potential, but it got sloppy at the end. The author uses his own vocabulary a lot, so many characters end up sounding the same tonally. For instance, every character at one point says something go the effect, “stupid amount o….” or “stupid hard/crazy”. The character developemnt stagnates and there’s a bunch of filler of him grinding skills that don’t do anything plot wise other than his word count.