Review Detail of D0nk3yK0ng in Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)

It had a lot of potential, but it got sloppy at the end. The author uses his own vocabulary a lot, so many characters end up sounding the same tonally. For instance, every character at one point says something go the effect, “stupid amount o….” or “stupid hard/crazy”. The character developemnt stagnates and there’s a bunch of filler of him grinding skills that don’t do anything plot wise other than his word count.