His true base form is the Golden one. As you said, all of his transformations are a downgrade, as such, when his power increase through whatever means, it becomes his base form. That’s a trait of his race. There was the precedent of Cooler who became Metal Cooler (or something) which in turn became his base form.
I always thought Yukari was the main creator of the barrier. Was I wrong?
It’s more like the intent are the tools needed to affect the laws.
I really hope that he would be able to do so without having to battle later. I know that technically this isn’t really a nerf, but at the same time, I believe that it doesn’t make sense that as an energy being and all that, he wouldn’t be able to absorb/store/restore his energy while on a higher level.
The book was a part of him all along! DUN DUN DUN!!!!
That’s one of the thing I never liked with all of the forms of Hell, the punishment is always ETERNITY. I personally believe that nobody deserve eternity. There are some who deserve the worst thing I can posibly imagine and some. But eternal damnation is something I wouldn’t wish for even the worst nutcase of human history. Of course, I believe that a certain amount of time in Hell could do the trick, but not eternity.
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If you really want to go in the details, Ares is the god of the brutal and merciless war and Athena the goddess of the strategical war. They are still both considered gods of war, but Ares is mainly a god of war.
I wonder if the higher realm from where the true Dark Emperor came from will ever come into play in the future. If it ever will, I guess it will either be Albion ascending around the middle of the novel, or the whole realm in which Albion lives leveling up to be a part of the higher realm. Don’t know if either will happen but honestly, I don’t even care ‘cause this novel is already God-tier for me, in my top three with « Anihilation Maker DXD » and « The Prince of Magic »!
I didn’t even know FFXVI was going to be released. Heck, I didn’t even know it was a thing! And I call myself a RPG player! Feels bad man.
Say that to Noctis. He always had some slow Monster Hunter like attack animations with some of the weapons it drove me crazy in some bosses (the pseudo-hidden ones, not the story ones).
Hummmm... if he only take out a weapon from the GoB, will it only be out temporarily (like, will it continiously suck out him prana/mana until he exhaust it, therefor unsummoning it), or will it stay out until he recalls it?
WHAT?! They don’t suck, the life out of you when you use them? Only leaving you at 1HP? I will report him for Hacks!
Well, light is faster than lightning, and the relative speed of teleportation is faster than both while time is what you want it to be (it can be slow or fast depending how you view it |ex: is 0.0001s fast or slow or is it just 0.0001s at the end of the day?). This is bullsh*t in real life, but not in a world where « laws » exist.
Nobless right? Cool guy, he know his stuff.
I’m wondering if the MC will keep his bad vision or if it is only a temporary affliction. Saying that because in my opinion, this is a huge nerf because having glasses in a fight is... limiting to say the least. More than that, one of the strongest point of GoH Sun Wukong/Jin Mori is his eyes. So I’m only guessing that it is a temporary affliction due to his eyes being in an unstable phase. Also, if you are looking to make a long story, try not to make the MC OP too quickly, particularly in the world of RWBY where the power levels are weird, like make him strong or average (which I doubt since he is the MC) among his pears. And then, (if you want to) give him something that will increase his growth rate (sudden memory gain, power up, pseudo zenkai boost, #hackeyes, #hackdivineweapons, sudden enlightment... you have the choice there, Jin is loaded). Honestly love the story so far, good progression, amusing MC/charcters,... All in all an amazing begining and an incredible potential for the rest of the story!
I know the reference but don’t remember the anime it came from. Feels bad man.
Honestly, the main reason I cannot help but correct the errors that I see (while not being an expert) is that I really like your work (In my top two alongside Anihilation Maker) and just can’t help myself. I also really like that you go as far as making Anglo-french (or any other language) sentences for your work (at least as long as we are on the French zones/characters). So if I am able to help a bit, then I will do it!