TentacleEthics
Good start. I like it. There are no glaring issues in grammar or sentence structure, the plot is at a good pace that I like. Not too fast, not too slow. Apocalyptic themed novels like this usually start with a full blown disaster but this one kinda eases you into it, kinda like the one in Epoch of the Twilight. The characters aren't mindless and there are subtle a developments here and there although some characters aren't exactly consistent and I don't understand their personality. I'll be back to write more as the story progresses.
This is your author, here to write a shameless review. This is my first novel and I opted to go with an apocalyptic theme. I know it's a very cliche of a theme but I thought I could put my own twists to it. I try my best to keep the story interesting and my release schedule the same at one chapter a day. If you would be so kind as to check out my novel, I would really appreciate it. Thanks!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I'm new to webnovels but I'm really liking this story so far. I'll talk about the two main things that i like the most. 1. the world the author writes the world in a way that's easy and entertaining to read. it's not a bunch of info dumps but a nice description of things we should pay attention to in each chapter. this is done by using imagery to describe the scenery of the world(apocalyptic w/magic? dontknow yet) 2. the mc the mc is given what is seemingly a really powerful ability(time related). he's pretty powerful but not too overpowered that he could fight boss level characters right away. his actions are also retarded and relatable for a lack of a better word. ie. thinking that eating a tree bark would be a good idea because eating stuff makes you more powerful
Out of the staggering amount of apocalypse novels that I have read this one definitely stands out, positively so. I love the mc and the side character's construction, the world building and etc, in all aspects this novel does pretty well. It's a shame that the author stopped uploading new chapters since 9 months ago. It's an underrated novel, I definitely recommend it.