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Review Detail of Battoth in Twisted World: The Time Lord's Diary

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Author said there will be smut but no romance but I think he meant no true love as the MC and his woman do share romantic moments in romantic settings (like a picnic among magical flowers and then being naughty in front of the tree of life for example) while depending on each other to make their lives mutually happier. Actually that's way more love than many marriages seem to contain right there. Maybe author meant no girl chasing/buttering up as he just threw her over his shoulder and took her away? I just wish author's naming sense was a bit better as too silly names breaks reading immersion slightly for me.

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Twisted World: The Time Lord's Diary

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TentacleEthics
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thank you for the review

God_of_War_Games
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when will you continue the novel?

TentacleEthics:thank you for the review
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idk man one of these days. life is tough and I have so little time to write now and also little motivation for this novel. my dilemma is that i planned so far ahead that i would rather write that than what's going on right now and i also feel like my writing skills aren't doing this novel justice. perhaps if i do a reboot, everything will turn out better but we will have to see

God_of_War_Games:when will you continue the novel?