Reviews of Twin Slime

Okay so first of all 1) Writing Quality:- this is like light novel to me quality is muchh better then the original one so a thumbs up to you 2)story development:- story plot is very interesting i must say it better than the original and so much realistic 3) skipped:- u already know 4)updating stability:- 3ch per week it's fair but he is doing it for free so I don't care nic story DONT DROP PLZ

i'm so sad what's the point to make a FF if you follow the original story and the mc panic every now and then if something is diffrent? idc if it's different after but i can't suffer more, i have read 35 chap and it's boring af, frustrating, the mc has 0 personnality... anyway i'm dropping

35 chapters and so far the plot has no significant changes too any events. Most of this story is copy and pasted, add some sprinkles to make it look pretty, and add an OC who basically walks in the shadow of MC the whole. lol its sad, he even stole a lot of the dislogue meant for rimuru. The author tries to make excuses for why he does this but its quite obvious. I was excited at first, especially when he was supposed to "entertain the sapient." but the sapient should of offed him after not doing anything. the MC lacks any personality. indifferent, one track mind. No friends. a few goals I guess. he does give a few extra characters names. thats something irrelevant to the plot but the author needs to at least change something. The lack of divergence in the plot shows a lack of trust in his ability to be creative. waiting 60 chapters for one change isn't worth reading everything prior. His grammar is pretty good tho. So there's that. If people want to pay me to use my crunchyroll site to watch this anime, you'll basically be watching this story minus 1 person. lol jp but seriously they are the same.

not bad but I prefer the old one :) ........................................................................................................

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Hi author, I enjoyed the original so I'm wondering If you are still going to continue it, or if you're going to drop it in favour of the rewrite? Thanks in advance.

This is getting more complicated with multiple Twin Slimes. Why you did not finish the (original) first then do others? everything started with baby steps.

Mc Is entertainment for a god dislike that and had his memory sealed or erased I hate that.

Overall, a very enjoyable story. I didn't expect much at first, but I found myself pleasantly surprised by the quality of your writing at the first few chapters. Twin Slime stays true to the original world of Tensura but differs enough to not just be a boring "copy-paste" of the novels, the main character is decently well writen which is something I (somehow) rarely find in most fanfics. Obviously, I'm not an expert writer so don't take my review at face value, I just really enjoyed and got hooked with the story. Something I really appreciate though, is the frequent release. Really, thank you for the time you spend writing this story, while it is a hobby of yours from what I've seen, it still takes much motivation to actually keep writing (at least for me, and probably a lot a fanfic writers). I also got informed of the "DiamondVerse", and gotta say, it's the part that surprised me the most, in a good way. The powerscaling seems very well structured, although I'm a bit confused on some parts, especially with the guardians but I won't go into details. The "DiamondVerse" is actually really similar in some ways to the own verse I've been writing, which is why I was pleased by it the most. But anyways, in conclusion : Great story, personally really liked it, I'm excited to see more !

One of the best Novels that i have read in Wbnovel 10/10 realy good godlike

ITS AWESOME HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST TENSHURA FANFIC I READ SO FAR HERE'S A 5 STAR RATING YOU DESERVE IT //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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I had dropped your previous work a little while ago. can’t tell you the reason cuz i forgot. but i’m glad to see you’re rewriting and i’ll give it a read and a better review later.

Really good tensura fanfic, i hope author can keep update this novel [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

It’s a pretty good fan-fiction novel, it’s just that it getting pretty boring in latter chapter, after the Walpurgis.

Story is just the same as original. MC too afraid to change the plot. This isn't even a Fanfic it should be refered to as Tensura(the copy). Sorry if you feel offended but that's my honest feeling about this novel.

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Just like other reviewers said. The novel is extremely good. Whether it's writing style or character development, it's just feel like reading a light novel. Though I must say that the Main Character will get Overpowered very quicklyafter Demon Lord Evolution. He had 6 Ultimate Skills (5 Initially after Evolution), which one of them is basically a weaker version of Azathoth from Cthulhu Mythology. Yeah he can make anything to become reality as long as he had enough magicule, that includes erasing existence or creation. Not to mention his other 5 Ultimate skill, that alone is enough to make him one of the strongest. Aside from that not much else I can say. The author knew the original plot wells and skillfully created many interesting scenario that does not contradict with what the original story had. 5/5 writing style 5/5 creativity (especially naming a new skills that doesn't exist in the original) 5/5 story & characters development