latheef_shaik
The sentences are not formatted well. Don't even get me started on the grammar, characters are introduced willy-nilly without background, most of the plot is fanservice without any significant development, no interesting character interactions (almost all of them being focused on romance or puerile manipulation schemes). To add the cherry on top there are major plot violations as well as au inconsistencies. It was painful to read. A grade 1 student can write better. Sigh!