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Reviews of Transmigration: Living in Anime Worlds

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Transmigration: Living in Anime Worlds

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not2complex
not2complexLv14not2complex

I love the plot direction and very well written for an "absolute novice writer" (for others reading this review - those words are the author describing himself not mine). I think the trait I like the most in your character development of Naruto is that he isn't afraid to call people out on their behavior and make them face the truth. You know - if a person is devious enough they can hurt people and make it appear to others as kindness. Let's look at facts - 1. "JiJi" supposedly hid his identity to protect him from possible outside attack - pfft - every day danger is more important than possible periodic danger coming from miles away and the target is protectively surrounded by a whole village (if they knew his heritage & educated on sealing rather than ignorance causing belief he is the demon and let's not forget he allowed him to be homeless & poor his whole life when his parents left him an inheritance 2. Iruka never tried to help him catch up with the class like any good teacher would do 3. kakashi gave him chakra paper, told him to cut a leaf, cut a waterfall and add wind to rasengan i.e. he told he did not teach - he told him to climb a tree with no hands and with no advice - However, he did teach his rival how to kill him (you know - the fight - the hole in chest) 4. His godfather made him sign a paper & through him off a cliff, taught him one jutsu (rasengan), taught him a method to break a genjutsu, made him walk for 3 years and showed him how a pervert acts These were the good people of Konaha ... This rant does have a point. GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! I loved that the first change he made was to stick up for himself and "guilt the hell" out of "JiJi"! So many characters deserve the same treatment. I like that you didn't follow the norm with "I must act stupid and wear orange so I'm not discovered" which realistically, people make drastic changes in their lives all the time. Looking forward to the development of your story and reading as it grows!

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minhazxz
minhazxzLv5minhazxz

Nice story development. ...... Shows promising..... Some parts can be change but still negligible.... Must ensure writing quality and background......

accelerator
acceleratorLv6accelerator

It's really a good start so five stars for now. And author continue your good job please...................................................................

ghjiutrvb66
ghjiutrvb66Lv3ghjiutrvb66

Everything's good so far author San, please publish more chapters. I'm curious, which other anime world will the mc visit? Don't mind me, stupid word count: Yhfufeufufy6f6f66igr8eeuyr6xf7f yo cfifif7fyf6f56vfufc6f56ffucf7g5c6cy7

yukiniie
yukiniieLv13yukiniie

Nice fan fiction <3 basicaly i'am french so me traduction is +/- good ? Anyway, I do not put 5 for the character design because it's a fanfiction ... The novel as a whole has a very good start and interest I judge perhaps prematurely because there are only 5 chapters when I write my criticism but I feel the potential. On the whole I am satisfied with this reading, and I want to say to the author not to worry about bad criticism unless it is constructive and make it go forward, critics can hurt but in the end it makes you move forward.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Imagine all most annoying clichΓ©s you can think of. Put them in a story and you get... This.... If something along the lines of a royal emperor phoenix dragon god summoning animal floats your boat. Along with pretty much every op thing you can imagine available to naruto in pretty much chapter 1... Gaming system included. Be warned the author also likes to use tons of emojis in the story. Probably to make sure all the emotionally blunted idiots reading the constant drama at the hokage and probably jiraya later on, understand that the characters involved feel strongly in these situations.... Yeah... That's the kind of story this is...

The_Hermit
The_HermitLv5The_Hermit

This is a bunch of bull crap. It basically destroys the beautiful work known as Naruto. I might sound like a bitch. ( OK, I am a bitch and I am fully aware.) The characters don't correspond with their original personalities in the original work. The mc is basically an overpowered scum. The conversations cause me to cringe. No character background. The book is full of plotholes. Overall, If possible I review it a zero.

Shen_byakko
Shen_byakkoLv5Shen_byakko

excellent novel πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ I love the development of the story and the attitude of the protagonist. get more chapters please ...........................

Deus_Dakota
Deus_DakotaLv15Deus_Dakota

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NovelShinigami
NovelShinigamiLv5NovelShinigami

I am so glad that I found this novrl. It is one of the best fanfics I have read till now. -------------- ------------- I only wish the updates were more :(

Shadow8ting
Shadow8tingLv13Shadow8ting

This is the best rating I can give this novel right now since its only its second chapter, I am very excited about this fanfic. Even though the mc is horribly op I hope to see good development. I hope that the author will go for a more chill mc and stay away from the brooding cool guy or the edgy psychopath. Its hard to say weather the story will soar or if it will flop.

Pedro_Padre
Pedro_PadreLv5Pedro_Padre

I like the story. MC reincarnates into his favorite anime character with gifts. but really, the start is bad. I've seen this kinds of stories a lot cause I've read countless naruto stories. The premise of the stories is always similar, he either has a magical bloodline that has never before been seen, so the Hokage decides to start caring for him like he should have from the very beginning and makes him marry multiple women or he gets hurt a lot and the Hokage doesn't actually care even if he's made to sound like he does, and then one day after a very brutal beating/torture that awakens and ancient bloodline or doesn't, the hokage decides its time to change everything. It's overused. If he's made to become the hokage or stay in the village and protect fools that don't deserve his help, i'm out.

Kenizhi
KenizhiLv5Kenizhi

Muy buena ,me encanta como es el nuevo naruto el cual es mas inteligente y no se obseciona con sakura o se deja golpear por ella por todo lo que hace.

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

keep up the great work ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

shutup_takemymoney
shutup_takemymoneyLv3shutup_takemymoney

Reveal spoiler

mie_jiejie98
mie_jiejie98Lv4mie_jiejie98

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Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

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Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

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zZCandyZz
zZCandyZzLv13zZCandyZz

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

black07messenger
black07messengerLv4black07messenger

The story have many mistakes,but still the story was good so far and I'm still enjoying it. So just keep up the good work author. And I'm still waiting for the update to come. I really wanna read it. Its been a days that the update didn't come