Review Detail of not2complex in Transmigration: Living in Anime Worlds

I love the plot direction and very well written for an "absolute novice writer" (for others reading this review - those words are the author describing himself not mine). I think the trait I like the most in your character development of Naruto is that he isn't afraid to call people out on their behavior and make them face the truth. You know - if a person is devious enough they can hurt people and make it appear to others as kindness. Let's look at facts - 1. "JiJi" supposedly hid his identity to protect him from possible outside attack - pfft - every day danger is more important than possible periodic danger coming from miles away and the target is protectively surrounded by a whole village (if they knew his heritage & educated on sealing rather than ignorance causing belief he is the demon and let's not forget he allowed him to be homeless & poor his whole life when his parents left him an inheritance 2. Iruka never tried to help him catch up with the class like any good teacher would do 3. kakashi gave him chakra paper, told him to cut a leaf, cut a waterfall and add wind to rasengan i.e. he told he did not teach - he told him to climb a tree with no hands and with no advice - However, he did teach his rival how to kill him (you know - the fight - the hole in chest) 4. His godfather made him sign a paper & through him off a cliff, taught him one jutsu (rasengan), taught him a method to break a genjutsu, made him walk for 3 years and showed him how a pervert acts These were the good people of Konaha ... This rant does have a point. GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! I loved that the first change he made was to stick up for himself and "guilt the hell" out of "JiJi"! So many characters deserve the same treatment. I like that you didn't follow the norm with "I must act stupid and wear orange so I'm not discovered" which realistically, people make drastic changes in their lives all the time. Looking forward to the development of your story and reading as it grows!