Nezothecat
Despite the use of a common trope and lack of originality concerning both the name and idea, it still doesn't detract from the joy of the story. The writing is slightly immature and it shows both in the characters and in the world building aspects. However, I find that the story is not only enjoyable but even slightly interesting. I find myself, both curious and looking forwards to see what this story becomes and, to the changes to the writer's style as they mature furthur.
I have read up to the last chapter currently published (18), until now the world of which the protagonist is now a inhabitant has been presented and developed in a consistent and timely manner. As for the protagonist, we are presented with a normal person, neither very evil nor very good, who wants a quiet life. The writing is fluid and I found each chapter interesting. Anyway, there is not much to say since the novel is good. But if you are a lover of fantasy and isekai novels, you should give this novel a try. PD: There's no system no golden finger, only the protagonist.
Good job author you got something wonderful going. Noell is pretty likable and nice to see him interacting with the world. Now for a few recommend from your good ol pal tavius. First I think this story would do good without ANY romance or things like that for Noell, and if you must I feel like it shouldn't be any of the MC 2's friends. Second please dive more into the people of this world and the magic. Third can we get more info about the other Mc I feel he is underused. Last Can we see more of the foes the characters will face like more info. Well than thank for reading and here's a fun fact Bananas are a berry while a strawberry is not.
tbh its not a bad novel, it's just that at the beginning, the butler's acceptance of his awakening knowledge was really forced, and felt extremely out of place. Rather than having that horrible introduction, it would've been better if the story had started from the school arc directly. Later on though, the story starts to become better. Hoping for better writing in the future!
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