Review Detail of TheTavius08 in Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son

Good job author you got something wonderful going. Noell is pretty likable and nice to see him interacting with the world. Now for a few recommend from your good ol pal tavius. First I think this story would do good without ANY romance or things like that for Noell, and if you must I feel like it shouldn't be any of the MC 2's friends. Second please dive more into the people of this world and the magic. Third can we get more info about the other Mc I feel he is underused. Last Can we see more of the foes the characters will face like more info. Well than thank for reading and here's a fun fact Bananas are a berry while a strawberry is not.