Very interesting introduction chapter. Author pulls you into this new world of love and loss with the crashing of a meteorite. Keep up the good work author! I look forward to reading more of your writing!!
Let me just start by saying, WOW. The author really throws you into this immersive world of violence and chaos. The extremely well written first chapter immediately sucked me in. Can't wait too devour this story!! Thank you Author for all your hard work!
The intro chapter was just her freeing the slaves and herself, in the second chapter it picks back up with them in the desert looking for a safe place to make camp.
Wow, the Author really put his soul into this story. beautifully written and immediately grabs your attention. Thank you, Author, for all your hard work!
Sourabha Rajyam - The Land Where Women Don't Matter
I really enjoy the book in a book, sequence you gave in the first chapter. How he fell asleep reading (as most of us do) and then woke up in another world. Very interesting plot, can't wait to see where this story goes! Thank you Author for your hard work!
Enter into a new world with this end of days feeling. The author opens your eyes to an apocalyptic world that is ready to unravel. Keep up the good work Author! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
The night sky was like it always was. Bloody red with a milky-white orb hovering in the middle. The streets were empty; not even a single light protruded from the dark homes. A thick blanket of silence smothered the entire town as shadows reached out for each other through the scarlet glow of the heavens. There were no cars, no drunkards nor businessmen trying to catch the last train. The only two people in the city talked underneath a broken streetlight, whispered to each other as if they were scared the shadows would hear them.
I don't read much Sci-fi, but this is GOOD. Very pleased with the style of writing and the plot. Very good, hope to see more chapters soon! Thank you Author for your hard work!
Disclaimer 2:- Any one with a weak heart, feelings that are easily offended, or who find a mature, wild, vivid, 'spicy'/'masala' descriptions, please stop here.
Sourabha Rajyam - The Land Where Women Don't Matter
Thank you everyone for keeping up on my story! I will be editing chapters and rewriting most of the early ones that weren't so good! haha Hope everyone had a Happy New Year!!