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Reviews of Tragic Hero System in Naruto World

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Tragic Hero System in Naruto World

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leonardobr
leonardobrLv4leonardobr

very good potential.the execution till now is perfect if the releases were more frequent would be best.good work author............................................................................-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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DabanCrow
DabanCrowLv14DabanCrow

Awesome work, I really enjoy it so far and hope that you can keep the chapters coming! Also, just putting it out there but I hope you can keep this story going for a long time as I enjoy it.

_Itachi_Uchiha
_Itachi_UchihaLv4_Itachi_Uchiha

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Rkthegreat11
Rkthegreat11Lv4Rkthegreat11

still waiting for a new chapter ..........................................................................................................................................................

UnsympatheticMoron
UnsympatheticMoronLv3UnsympatheticMoron

This is a very good story. Probably the only one I watch everyday, constantly waiting for an update and yearning to see and read more of this work of art. It is a story I wouldn't mind recommending. Kudos autho-san!

_Itachi_Uchiha
_Itachi_UchihaLv4_Itachi_Uchiha

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OXob
OXobLv5OXob

Not bad but not that good either, its the same reincarnation to naruto with system if you didnt know. Problems I have are that you're mixing too much chinese into a japanese setting which might be fine for the MC but not for others like Ayame, your dialogues structured in an annoying way and lastly you really need to explain the system better. Updates are rare and when they do happen its not that much, grammar is readable, development is slow, character design is basically Yhang Ze if he was a loser.

brudu
bruduLv14brudu

une bonne histoire, il et juste dommage de tros suivre l'histoire de naruto , je trouve que sa limite le développement de l'histoire. par exemple , avec un monde parallèle presque comme naruto avec des différence mineur, comme le nombre de montagne ou de clan dans le village pourra vous aider .

superdupertrash
superdupertrashLv3superdupertrash

I have but one issue with this story! It just doesn’t have enough. Hopefully you won’t get bored and drop it. Great job. I'm too lazy to make this 140 characters.

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt

is there a harem im very frustrated its hard finding what you want on this site but they have so many fan fics what do I do I feel like sulking I like harem fan fics but no one puts tags or is not planning on putting in a harem they should put tags for this stuff as a site they would take away a lot of frustration but ill ask again is there a harem?

Vans_Journalist
Vans_JournalistLv5Vans_Journalist

I’d normally take points off for the main character being a dumb cunt in the beginning, but it seems like β€œdumb cunt” is his default setting, and he’s going to grow out of it in the future. Hopefully.