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Review Detail of OXob in Tragic Hero System in Naruto World

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Not bad but not that good either, its the same reincarnation to naruto with system if you didnt know. Problems I have are that you're mixing too much chinese into a japanese setting which might be fine for the MC but not for others like Ayame, your dialogues structured in an annoying way and lastly you really need to explain the system better. Updates are rare and when they do happen its not that much, grammar is readable, development is slow, character design is basically Yhang Ze if he was a loser.

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Tragic Hero System in Naruto World

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