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To Reach You
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To Reach You

LucidGlome

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What is To Reach You

To Reach You is a popular web novel written by the author LucidGlome, covering LOVE AFTER MARRIAGE, TRUST, REGRET, CONFESSION, UNDERSTANDING, STRAIGHTFORWARD FL, YOUNG COUPLE, LOVE AND LIFE, BOLD FL, SENSIBLE, Contemporary Romance genres. It's viewed by 15.1K readers with an average rating of 0/5 and 3 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 21 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Vance Vonn Cale is a heartthrob at 26. Having studied finance, he works as the CFO for U.Y. Corp where he had been working since completing studies. Nicolette Perrin is a computer programmer working for Abel Games and has dreamed of being a violinist since college. She is 22 years old. Both had no faith in marriage for their own reasons. When the two families met for a proposal, though Nicole objected and Vance thought the same, he gave his consent before their parents. Nicole's eyes had narrowed then but would their now entangled lives have a wedge or the fortune of love?

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Pickled_Chiki
Pickled_ChikiLv3Pickled_Chiki

This is one of the few heart-warming romance novels I've ever read. Couldn't stop reading even if I wanted to. There were a few hiccups in the grammar but all of us web novel authors have it and I'm not too picky about them, like many others. What is a big issue would be your update rates. Honestly, I quite liked your novel and wouldn't mind reading more of it but since your update is a bit slow, you might lose the audience that you painfully acquire. After all, the novels which one read the most is the one which always stays at the top of one's library. Anyway, I'm a newbie just like you and I hope we can get along well. Excited about your novel and the upcoming chapters!

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

Let's try this again. Let's cut to the chase. Your dialogue is excellent. Keep doing what you're doing with that. What I will change is the garnish around said dialogue. Actions speak louder than words, which ironically still applies even in writing. Try describing the cadence, their tone, off hand mannerisms, whenever they say something important or impactful. It'll give their statements a bit more oomph to it. You might want to find the infographic for all the words that can replace 'said' depending on tone, that's the ultimate cheat sheet that I use. Grammar has its fair share of hiccups, nothing another pass through can't fix. Story and plot is moving rather nicely so no complaints there. That's it then. I do apologize for my earlier review. I'm still new to this after all.

BaeVida
BaeVidaLv5BaeVida

Okay, for the review. Nice synopsis. Writing quality, character development.... Update stability... Trust me, d more update u get, the more views couples wit powerstone votes. Of which u are your biggest fan in that regard. Now your story is good. The problem I have as a reader, it would be better if you could separate their thoughts from your normal narration. Perhaps u can put it in a bracket or something to differentiate and give an info about that parenthesis at the beginning of a chapter, so they understand. Or simply just... Let me leave that, u know what suits u best. I say that because sometimes u merged the thoughts and narration and talk. I can distinguish but it wud disturb d flow of reading. Little typos but as a writer I can clearly understand, av got those too in my books. So when people make reference I go change them. For a newbie, you are doing a great job. Keep it up.

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