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RedCeiling1yrCommentedCh 21 Unexpected Moment (3)- RedCeiling1yrCommented
"Don't see women as fine ladies, see them as rational creatures." ~Jane Austen. Please.
Sheng Chu wasn't truly mad. As a woman, it was her instinct to blame men. - RedCeiling1yrCommented
xinxin* it's written xunxin
While Jiang Yanxu patted Ye Xunxin's back reluctantly until Ye Xinxin loosened his grip. - RedCeiling1yrCommented
'give a reaction*' or just 'react'
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I thought she was still spitting blood because someone kicked her? She's here sleeping at home. If you ever review this novel, please make sure there's the required consistency.
"No!" Sara shrieked out, sitting up straight. She was palpitating, as cold beads sweats formed on her forehead. She looked around, it was not her old house. It was just a nightmare. - RedCeiling2yrReplied to dnvfrye
I'm Asian, just not Chinese and I'm also confused.
An inexplicable marriage and an inexplicable divorce. - RedCeiling2yrCommented
Alright, this is the second time she's walking away before she finished speaking completely. I am not a great writer myself but as a reader I have trouble imagining that. If she's going to walk out before completing her sentence, how much exactly is heard by WZ? I think it's important that I know what he hears. Take this as an advice, if you will.
Su Yan stood up and walked out before she could finish her sentence. The moment she turned around, her eyes were uncontrollably red. - RedCeiling2yrCommentedCh 15 Wen Huiyi Finally Fessed Up
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hol'up I thought he was into business and mafia?
"You are the one who tidies up everything in this room, aren't you?" Gu Juexi held her wrist in his left hand while on his right hand was a stack of movies that he directed or played a role. - RedCeiling2yrCommented
he Nan's expression at this ...
Chu Wuyou did not seem to feel anything despite what was going on. She unexpectedly walked towards a stuffed rabbit and tapped its head gently. The rabbit bounced lightly as she tapped. She tapped it again and it bounced once more. She kept tapping and tapping and tapping… - RedCeiling2yrCommented
really do be getting bnhh vibes
Almost at the second Song Qingchun finished her question, Su Zhinian's flat voice rang out. "I want you." - RedCeiling2yrCommented
SZ = Ino TN = Shikamaru
"What are you doing?" Tang Nuo waved his hand in front of Su Zhinian to catch his attention. - RedCeiling2yrReplied to Kriyu_G
BNHH
"CEO Su, CEO Lu, Mr. Lu Jinnian from Huan Ying Entertainment is here; he's waiting for you at the company." - RedCeiling2yrCommented
Say he controls a girl on her period... what happens then?
From the moment he realized he had this power until now, he had been careful in using it. In fact, he had definitely used it less than ten times. This was because in the period when he controlled others, if the person suffered physical injury, he would suffer the same injury on his own body. Other than that, he could not control people to hurt others. Similarly, if the person he controlled hurt others, he would suffer the similar injury as the ones inflicted. - RedCeiling2yrCommented
There is no need to repeat scenes from Officer Liu's PoV right?
"Put your gun down! They might shoot you!" Jiron repeated. - RedCeiling2yrReplied to Hillside_girl
LOL
"Hhhmmm... I thought Ms. Tang rejected CEO Mo? " He mumbled as he rubbed his chin. - RedCeiling2yrCommented
Sleepy not dizzy..
Minutes have past, Kresha feel dizzy, so she closed her eyes to take a nap. - RedCeiling2yrCommented
Hmm, that's rather unexpected. So she only only has 2 suitors.. that's better
"Oh c'mon! She already rejected you Jiron!" Arriene is angry now. He want to open his brother's eyes and let him see the reality!