Throne of the Grand Magus: The beginning

A brilliant world setting. The use of magical elements is simple and fascinating. Great job in dialogue and writing quality is superb. Looking forward to Clara's further actions.

I am a hugeeee sucker for all things magical, so the auther had me there. I love the development of the characters and the world the author has created. I can not wait for more chapers to be released!

Another shameless review by the Author. Thought the first chapters of the book might feel slow that's because it's the introduction arc. It's more about the other characters and world setting than it is about the MC. I recommend reading it to get a background of both the world and it's inhabitants. Important information is told in this arc which will later prove useful. The main arc starts at about chapter 38 and that's when all the real fun begins. I swear the book is worth the read, join me in my journey as we watch Arya grow up or you know fail doing it.

i don't even know why all these people rated this up of 3 stars they found it good well i didn't this thing was cliche and very bad too idk when the mc got powers but it was definitely after 30 chaps so it was very boring and its like many other cliche revenge novel where the mc's parents hide their identity to stay safe bs

The novel is basically just : Mc starts caring for someone > they die > repeat. It probably gets better if all the 5-star reviews are to be believed but god It's hard to read. It seems that the author wants a certain type of mc and to do that he needed to "break" him and does so in the most hard-to-read way. I was trying to get through these parts but around 40 chapters in the author replied to a comment telling us that it was nowhere close to done so I just had to drop it.

∞/10 FOR THIS ONE RIGHT HERE!!! (me)😤🤝🧐(this intellectual author). The world building is phenomenal and has so much potential for growth. The grammar, dialogue and sentence structure is top tier (me [again])😤🤝🧐(this intellectual author [again]). Definitely deserves to have their feet licked– I mean massaged...... "Yow! smile for the camera you freaky bozo" 😶📷🤨 "Make sure to get my good side in there!" ✌️🤪💥📸🤨

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So I've seen many authors rate their own book. Here we go. So I feel like my English isn't that bad, although I do have a lot of room to improve. My updates are pretty stable, I release about 3 updates everyday. I believe my story development is really good as this is going to be a really long novel and my pacing seems pretty okay. For character design I feel it's pretty good aswell. I'm giving every character screen time not just the MC. My world background will be massive, with just 10 chapters out I feel like I've introduced quite a bit. Overall 4.6 and yes I know it seems like an overestimation.

This story are the best ,I don't know what today but this story something can make relate it with my life thanks author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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someone posted a review calling the writing quality 'superb' which is blatantly wrong. the author constant mixes up "your" & "you're" as well as "their" & "they're" many words which should have a space between them don't, and words that should be one word aren't. overall it's readable, but there are some glaring mistakes littered about. so if the other user means "superb writing quality" as in "better than a machine translated novel" then i agree.

Very nice synopsis, attractive enough to entice readers into wanting to know what happened to Cascade. Loving the name by the way, I added it to my favorite boy names lol. Anyway, overall the story so far is great and the plot is interesting. I love reincarnation stories, though I mostly read them in manga. Loving this one so far but why is Michael so savage? Lol. I'm loving the touch of comedy in this too, nicely done author, I'm looking forward to more updates :)

WQ: (3/5). US: (5/5). SD: (3/5). CD: (3/5). WB: (4/5). Start was a little rough but didnt take long before it picked up the main thing about the story. It still is a little slow for reasons i wont spoil 😅 but its interesting just to say. Writing needs improvement but im sure that will naturally happen as we progress. Pretty good, waiting for more [img=update][img=recommend]

Really Enjoyed reading this. I love what the author did with the family and how the characters are set up. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

So far the story is rather interesting and the authors english is quite good. Though I do have a few complaints. The author starts off by killing too many characters, so much so you can't get attached to one. Although this stops later on in the novel, it is kind of a pain to read. Secondly, the author seems to have very dark themes, there are some parts in the novel where I wondered of the sanity of the author. But apart from that the novel has taken quite an interesting turn in the later chapters, the novel has me hooked. Looking forward to more from you.

Your story is good, but I just like the story's progression, from where that girl became haunted in a banal way, I hope they split up because I really don't like this thing that's become repeated in all the good novels in terms of character development.

oshiponga! wow this read is hella addictive. The writing of the novel isnt mediocre for a first timer. The author keeps up with updates. Characters were introduced really well. So far just loving it.

From the style to its structure, this novel is superb. It has the grammatical format that is just my spot of tea! The storyline flows from one chapter to another to create a holistic and cohesive plot that almost drives itself.

First of all, I must say that the character building and the way that the author has described every character it feels as if every character has been thoroughly fleshed out! It's as if the author knows his characters well and he has flawlessly described them!!! I am thoroughly amazed by this story an dI am waiting for the other chapters to release. I hope you keep up the amazing world-building and the story development❤❤❤❤

Honestly, a ten outta ten from me, I didnt expect much but holy!, that was a ride.[img=recommend]. it was amazing i recommend it to anyone. This is criminally underrated