A brilliant world setting. The use of magical elements is simple and fascinating. Great job in dialogue and writing quality is superb. Looking forward to Clara's further actions.

I am a hugeeee sucker for all things magical, so the auther had me there. I love the development of the characters and the world the author has created. I can not wait for more chapers to be released!

Another shameless review by the Author. Thought the first chapters of the book might feel slow that's because it's the introduction arc. It's more about the other characters and world setting than it is about the MC. I recommend reading it to get a background of both the world and it's inhabitants. Important information is told in this arc which will later prove useful. The main arc starts at about chapter 38 and that's when all the real fun begins. I swear the book is worth the read, join me in my journey as we watch Arya grow up or you know fail doing it.

i don't even know why all these people rated this up of 3 stars they found it good well i didn't this thing was cliche and very bad too idk when the mc got powers but it was definitely after 30 chaps so it was very boring and its like many other cliche revenge novel where the mc's parents hide their identity to stay safe bs

The novel is basically just : Mc starts caring for someone > they die > repeat. It probably gets better if all the 5-star reviews are to be believed but god It's hard to read. It seems that the author wants a certain type of mc and to do that he needed to "break" him and does so in the most hard-to-read way. I was trying to get through these parts but around 40 chapters in the author replied to a comment telling us that it was nowhere close to done so I just had to drop it.

∞/10 FOR THIS ONE RIGHT HERE!!! (me)😤🤝🧐(this intellectual author). The world building is phenomenal and has so much potential for growth. The grammar, dialogue and sentence structure is top tier (me [again])😤🤝🧐(this intellectual author [again]). Definitely deserves to have their feet licked– I mean massaged...... "Yow! smile for the camera you freaky bozo" 😶📷🤨 "Make sure to get my good side in there!" ✌️🤪💥📸🤨

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So I've seen many authors rate their own book. Here we go. So I feel like my English isn't that bad, although I do have a lot of room to improve. My updates are pretty stable, I release about 3 updates everyday. I believe my story development is really good as this is going to be a really long novel and my pacing seems pretty okay. For character design I feel it's pretty good aswell. I'm giving every character screen time not just the MC. My world background will be massive, with just 10 chapters out I feel like I've introduced quite a bit. Overall 4.6 and yes I know it seems like an overestimation.

This story are the best ,I don't know what today but this story something can make relate it with my life thanks author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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