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author is 100% white
author is trying to be incredibly edgy and "cool" for no reason. it makes it just more cringe
While I really enjoy the world setting, I have major problems with the MC. To me, he is the worst MC I have ever witnessed. He is a proper narcissist, with a terrible attitude. He is a highly flawed character, but apparently, everyone is just too stupid to see it or to actually bother. He treats everyone except for Susan like shit and gets an attitude when he's being called out for it. He just has too many plot armours to get a proper reality check. There are honestly too many character flaws to list...
instead of giving them troop Plans earlier on he waits for no reason. the can pay later but waiting longer just deminishes their chance of survival. and he legit didn't give them anything for free.
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get ur names right, who tf are Vale and Lisa.
who tf is land?
nothing should've changed since the mc never interfered with anything related to the party....
nothing made sense in this paragraph...
he told every former slave where the city is, and now he is moving the city lol
what???
bro, she is 12??????
where is Sarah?
gwen was one of the strongest ppl in the entire kingdom, defeated by some random dude. sounds super forced only to get Hem on a revenge arc or something.
that Sound incredibly forced and kind of like Victoria is just a skyrim npc. no reflexes, nothing...
bruh Same old trope
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