Hey folks Feng here,
First of all, thank you all for the feedback. I have read through all of them and have made some changes based on them.
Current situation:
-> So we're a Three-man team, together we are making this soon-to-be "piece of art". I'm the main brain behind the scene. The other two are my assistants.
-> In chapter 10, Max's surname became Tylore, it's fixed now.
-> Chapter 11 is updated, it's even smaller and better. The presence of Tommy messed up the storyline. Which caused a seizure to one of my assistants. So I found an alternate route.
-> If you don't find Tommy in some chapters just assume he hasn't done something worthwhile to be written about. Give that kid some rest.
Now the juicy part:
-> The number of chapters released each day will be more (around 4-8, depending on my output).
-> This is not to rush the story but rather to set a base fast. I know how boring it is to wait for the childhood to end. (I have read quite many books dealing with childhood, pretty aware of the nuances of "how not to mess up".
-> Also feel free to give ideas, my assistants and I would love to materialise them.
-> Last point, most of the Marvel engagements I have planned are from popular movies like The Avengers and the stand-alone (and some certain series). A few of the series are just straightaway weird and I will not acknowledge.
That's all for this announcement, thanks again for spotting the errors. I'll see you guys in the next announcement or the comments.