Two Hundred
Story development is good, similar to other rebirth novel - Cheating fiance and elder sister, doting grandfather, father and mother, cold ML. But author/translator needs to do quite a good amount of editing. It's confusing sometimes because of wrong he/she usage. I hope author consider this before posting.
The plot is quite good for me. I even added this to my library. However, what's with the translation? Is this a translation made by a machine? While reading, I can't help but edit the grammar inside my head. I mean, seriously? I think it's better to read the MTL version, if there is. The names, pronouns, and even the people who are talking inside the story as all mixed up. Please give justice to the story by fixing the basics. A good sentence structure gives life to even the most boring story. Those who love to read will surely relate. (This is just a constructive criticism. No offense meant) P.S. If you delete this, I'm going to post it again.
I really wanted to like this book. I love books where they get a 2nd chance, however the translation is horrible! I can deal with some grammer errors, but this translator doesn't seem to have a grasp of English pronouns. It is just too confusing when they are referring to the leading lady in one sentence as a she or her and in the very next calling her a he or him. This is a constant problem that try as I might, I just cannot get past. Thumbs down.
Love it so far, besides the fact that females are called as a male or males are called as a female throughout it.. otherwise it's good.. definitely got me on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to be coming next.. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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