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Review Detail of Umapaari in The Tales of a Blessed Daughter

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Umapaari
UmapaariLv132yrUmapaari

Story development is good, similar to other rebirth novel - Cheating fiance and elder sister, doting grandfather, father and mother, cold ML. But author/translator needs to do quite a good amount of editing. It's confusing sometimes because of wrong he/she usage. I hope author consider this before posting.

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The Tales of a Blessed Daughter

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Tashady
TashadyLv15Tashady

Not just gender, but sentence construction as well. Inferring what's meant takes a lot of fun out of reading the story!

carhine_09
carhine_09Lv11carhine_09

Yes and some sentences were confusing due to error in construction and addressing the characters. The author should proofread it first before posting. Though the story development is good as well as the character building.

Haiz
HaizLv6Haiz

anybody have raw name of this book?

Umapaari
UmapaariLv13Umapaari

Not able to find

Invisible_Ecka
Invisible_EckaLv4Invisible_Ecka

it's because they're using machine translation. mtl