Kelvin_A
Okay, I'm going to be completely honest here. I'm not much of a reviewer but I'll give it a try. The title attracted me here but I was skeptical after I saw the genre. I mean yeah it had the name of one of my favorite protagonists in Its title but I thought, should I read a novel like this just because it had the name, Ragnar? Then I gave the first chapter a try with the aim of leaving it once it wasn't to my taste but I was shell-shocked by the unexpected familiarity with the Vikings movie. I had to check once again to confirm if I wasn't reading fanfic but still the author was able to develop a wonderful novel that just shows how much he loves and knows about the world of Vikings. Writing quality is top much with no grammatical errors so far as I have read which is sadly 40+ when compared to the current 89 chapters it has. I've been glued to my seat ever since I started. Update stability is pretty good as it is consistent. Character development is just wonderful as we follow the growth of both Tyr and Bjorn. The novel is just spectacular as I it makes it easier for me to visualize a lot of the characters in the novel, enabling the world background to flow easily to the story. Love how you were able to give so many characters enough screen time in the novel. Even lagertha also 😍😍
I'd give it a 3/5 if it wasn't for the poor character design of the MC, and the development of the story itself lacking. I found myself skipping through paragraphs each chapter simply because they weren't entertaining and couldn't keep me focused on them. The story itself, from the 30 chapters I read, focused more on everything else than it did the MC and his own character development, which, in my opinion, destroys the entire purpose of the first bit of chapters which are typically used to introduce most characters, and show character development to the MC. The chapters themselves felt like they kept getting shorter and shorter, with like almost nothing interesting happening at all during the first 30 chapters. Overall, just a bad story, poorly thought out imo.
Comprehensive insights on what this story is about should unfold in the coming chapters , but from what I have read so far, this adventure lowkey is just beginning, reminds of Troy carnage and the likes. A decent read and would keep tabs on the progress of this. This was a good one kelvin..✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👈✍️👈✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
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Good novel but I disagree with the fact this isn't a fan fiction, much of the lineage here is only from Vikings and in reality all of Ragnar's sons that are notable (aside from a passing mention) come from his 2nd and third wife (Ragnar met lagertha when he went to avenge his grandfather and she was key to his victory)