Bojuwoye_Ayoola
Firstly I like the concept. The updates look stable and the story development is well progressive. The character design is also good. The writing is easy to understand but a little work in clarity would make it better. The world background could use some work but overall there is a good development. Overall, it's a good story and can be made better moving ahead. The suggestion I would like to make is to use the world around in the conversations to spice things up :)
Seems like I'm the first review! First of all, let me start with this: I'm not well-versed in star wars, but I do know Palpatine, Luke Skywalker, Darth Vader, etc. . . the concept is present and the author was able to make the characters fulfill their individual roles. I do find an issue in the grammar, but this could be improved in time. Overall, great read. Keep on writing.