Review Detail of BRPever in The Skywalker:Battle Royale

Firstly I like the concept. The updates look stable and the story development is well progressive. The character design is also good. The writing is easy to understand but a little work in clarity would make it better. The world background could use some work but overall there is a good development. Overall, it's a good story and can be made better moving ahead. The suggestion I would like to make is to use the world around in the conversations to spice things up :)