Daenir
Shamelessness knows no bounds. I am the author of this book, and will be rating it with 5 stars. Writing Quality will definitely be above average ;) Stability of Updates ... At least 7 chapters a week. Story Development, Character Design and World Background. I will be working hard on that. Since this is my very first novel, I will be doing my best to improve. Hehe, Peace Out!
Wroting quality is good, it's easy to read and understand. Character design is also good and well made, an amazing feat for me. while updating stability is a bit off and long wait I'd still read it if there's a new chapter better to have a new chapter than never it's a good book. world background is also amazing. really good, keep up the good work author I hope you release more chapters more frequently since its a pandemic HEHE
4 minutes before new year. better do a good deed before the end 2018. ive supported this novel from the very start. it was bumpy ride at the start and the author was the 1st to shapeshift into a better one. u improved greatly author. reader should have a bit of patiece when reading tis lol. and novel needs a bit of recognition. Happy newyear happy new year happpy new year
It's about time that I leave a review on this book. The book was well written. You can see that the author is doing his best to improve the quality of his work. It's fine to make mistakes sometimes and I only saw a few of it. The story as of now was pretty good and I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Kudos to you! And like u always say: Peace out!
The author's writing is great. There were a few typos but only minor ones that could be easily overlooked. The story development is also good. I'd like to comment tho that maybe adding more dialogues can make the story much more engaging because the way things are now, I feel like we readers are just watching from the sidelines. Also, I didn't like that there were a lot of information about the world in the 1st chaps. It's my personal preference but I get easily bored when there's too much info.
Accidentally stumbling upon this novel was simply fate. LOL. Story Development and World Background are good so far. Anyways, there was a problem with the prologue. I dont know what that is, really. There are mistakes in some sentences. Lack of conversation in the earlier chapters which pulled down character design.
I was finding it hard to read because of the lack of conversation between characters. The fights and most interactions were narated which was not compelling to me. Anyway, stability of updates and story development are all good. Well paced. Character design might need to add few depths while the world background looked good.
Writing Quality is good, I like how the story goes. The story development is not that good but it's decent. Being able to create a decent story is (I can't describe it in words). Character design also is good 5 stars for that. Updating stability is not that good IDK why but author you should update more often. The world background is also decent and creative not to mention resourceful in thinking ideas about it. All in all it's great book. PLEASE AUTHOR UPDATE MORE OFTEN.
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping your readers updated to any even small Hiatuses you do (currently 3 weeks w/o update, if your story is complete make that clear too) Positive Feedback: I feel this story is well written, and I have no quality complaints.;,;. Personal Feedback: I'm sorry, this story is not really my cup of tea, I will not continue reading it... However, I hope you keep writing it for the sake of your fans.;,;. Score: SoU 4/5 Rest 5/5