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Dawsonrose
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The author's writing is great. There were a few typos but only minor ones that could be easily overlooked. The story development is also good. I'd like to comment tho that maybe adding more dialogues can make the story much more engaging because the way things are now, I feel like we readers are just watching from the sidelines. Also, I didn't like that there were a lot of information about the world in the 1st chaps. It's my personal preference but I get easily bored when there's too much info.

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I knew that the first 4 chaps were a pain to read but I cannot do anything about it. Thank you for taking your time to read and review my novel. :)