*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping your readers updated to any even small Hiatuses you do (currently 3 weeks w/o update, if your story is complete make that clear too) Positive Feedback: I feel this story is well written, and I have no quality complaints.;,;. Personal Feedback: I'm sorry, this story is not really my cup of tea, I will not continue reading it... However, I hope you keep writing it for the sake of your fans.;,;. Score: SoU 4/5 Rest 5/5
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