Reviews of The Secret of God's Mountain
The Secret of God's Mountain
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Great book so far. As of chapter 7, the MC doesn't really know what's going on, so I don't either. But, I am interested to see what happens next. I will update my review as I read more. Also, the writing quality is excellent. Easily on par with published, professional authors.
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Writing as part of a review swap, and currently up to Chapter 28. I must say that this is a rather refreshing and interesting story. I do like the fantasy genre though I don't read it in WN for some strange reason. Anyway! On to the review. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language and any grammatical errors are negligible here. To me, at least. The flow is good and it doesn't detract from the reader's enjoyment of the story. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. I think 3 chapters is rather ambitious and would advise dear Author to just stick to one chapter a day. Stockpiling the chapters are good. Readers tend to like stability. Story Development: it's certainly different for me. I won't spoil the storyline but essentially, it's progressing well with some secret mixed in. Character Design/World Background: Its build-up is good and description is detailed enough for me. There are traits of MC that is coming out which is slightly disturbing but considering the synopsis, I suppose that is something that the Author is definately building up to. Anyway, overall, it was a good read. I like the unique names and MC's name makes me think of ancient Egyptian times. It's kinda cool, really.All the best Author!
Hi the creator here! This is a new novel and my first one on here. So honest feedback is appreciated (i am known by my friends for my typos)...now on to the a tual novel. This novel follows the story of A-Narah. A girl who grew up in a very traditional and strict household. She and all of her sisters have been confined their entire lives. The story starts slow as I want readers to understand A-Narah's background, her ideologies and her values. All of this changes as the story progresses but to understand and build her as a character you need to see where she came from and how that change happened. This isn't a reincarnation novel where her personality can change right away and she can start fighting and having a lot of action. The novel is set in a fantasy world that mixes western and eastern cultures. You will find Middle Kingdom is a place where cultures have been forcefully mashed together. But more of that and why it is that way will get revealed in the story. The novel is also first and foremost a fantasy. I do love romance and romance will come in later, but there won't be any love at first site. People will have to guess who the ML is. So pick up the novel, save it, leave a review, vote, and comment. ~11am
