Review Detail of 11am in The Secret of God's Mountain

Hi the creator here! This is a new novel and my first one on here. So honest feedback is appreciated (i am known by my friends for my typos)...now on to the a tual novel. This novel follows the story of A-Narah. A girl who grew up in a very traditional and strict household. She and all of her sisters have been confined their entire lives. The story starts slow as I want readers to understand A-Narah's background, her ideologies and her values. All of this changes as the story progresses but to understand and build her as a character you need to see where she came from and how that change happened. This isn't a reincarnation novel where her personality can change right away and she can start fighting and having a lot of action. The novel is set in a fantasy world that mixes western and eastern cultures. You will find Middle Kingdom is a place where cultures have been forcefully mashed together. But more of that and why it is that way will get revealed in the story. The novel is also first and foremost a fantasy. I do love romance and romance will come in later, but there won't be any love at first site. People will have to guess who the ML is. So pick up the novel, save it, leave a review, vote, and comment. ~11am