Review Detail of PsyberRose in The Secret of God's Mountain

Writing as part of a review swap, and currently up to Chapter 28. I must say that this is a rather refreshing and interesting story. I do like the fantasy genre though I don't read it in WN for some strange reason. Anyway! On to the review. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language and any grammatical errors are negligible here. To me, at least. The flow is good and it doesn't detract from the reader's enjoyment of the story. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. I think 3 chapters is rather ambitious and would advise dear Author to just stick to one chapter a day. Stockpiling the chapters are good. Readers tend to like stability. Story Development: it's certainly different for me. I won't spoil the storyline but essentially, it's progressing well with some secret mixed in. Character Design/World Background: Its build-up is good and description is detailed enough for me. There are traits of MC that is coming out which is slightly disturbing but considering the synopsis, I suppose that is something that the Author is definately building up to. Anyway, overall, it was a good read. I like the unique names and MC's name makes me think of ancient Egyptian times. It's kinda cool, really.All the best Author!