The rise of the King cobra

Decently written, cool idea but unfortunately the guy is a simp among simps.

It's pretty good I like the MC so far, but not a lot so far to get to really know him as he barely talks, like his skill with the snakes about two chapters a week which is pretty good for the stability of update, not the best but still good. Has a lot of room for growth and will review it once again after I get a better feel for the story. A couple of con is that the author doesn't really describe character features really well unless you know these characters you won't get a good idea of what they look like. And the beginning feels kinda rush and the why would Maine gang try to kidnap the MC, the only reason they did that with David is that he supposedly stole the main sandevison. Another question I have is, if the snake can swallow implants, can he save those implants for himself or use those snakes to implant those inside of himself otherwise not a bad read for a cyberpunk 2077 fanfic.

the story was ok at the start but frm he saw kawi are whatever her name was story just went down hill he was a top assassin turn simp

this is good please keep it up! im glad you have a stable updates as well a grammer!!