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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Bond of family

Nasir arrived before his father room he knocked. Haim replied "Come in"

"Let's get to the main point I have discussed with the emperor about you and asked to let you participate in the competition you should start preparing, you don't have much time I will provide all the resources you need and yeah take care of yourself while training...you can go"

Nasir knew his father love in very much without saying much he replied "Thank you father I will work hard" he left the room and arrived in his training room.

"System is there any way to make my family members powerful?" Nasir thought about it and asked hopefully.

"Ding... Host there is a sub system for this but it will start when your first child will born"

"oh..." Nasir cuckled.

Nasir went back to his room saw both Jasmine and Mu Xue we chatting happily.

"So where were you?" Mu Xue asked pondering.

"Father just called me... anyways try to get used to your new powers otherwise power without mastery person are waste" Nasir

"I still don't get it generally from mortal realm to saint realm itself takes years of cultivation even with supreme talent" Mu Xue suddenly said.

She confusingly asked "I was born saint king peak because my father had Saint lord cultivation base that time every realm breakthrough takes ten to hundred of years my age is 26, people of this age even heavenly chosen genius are still at saint ancestor, even more they are nurtured with many heavenly pills and medicines, it's very strange how can I have so strong foundation yet so fast breakthrough..?"

"Yeah it's strange but it's true but don't forget we aren't even close to strongest person in this galaxy not to mention universe and cosmos" Nasir said while looking towards sky.

Nasir continued "you two take rest tomorrow we will test our strength" as he said he went towards his cultivation room.

"Chaos open see my status" Nasir

"Host your status"

Host: Nasir

Host Professions- Alchemy, blacksmith, Rune, Talisman, Warrior, Cook and Mage System (Supreme Immortal Grade).

Cultivation Base: Supreme Saint Sovereign layer.

Cultivation technique: The Origin Arts.

Martial arts: Thunder Steps,Blazing Flame Sword Arts,Star Finger(Heaven grade)

Supreme All Attribute Primal Chaos technique essence of for mind/soul, fist, leg, sword/all weapon, movement.

Bloodline: The Origin Bloodline

Physique: The Origin Physique

Martial Spirit: The Origin Spirit

Spiritual Roots: The Origin Roots

Spiritual Consciousness/mind/perception: Supreme Saint Emperor realm

"It's so different from where I started cultivation speed is so fast, too fast.. only martial arts are bit too weak need to go library soon!" Nasir cuckled awkwardly.

"Ding... Host important reminder, Chaos system can upgrade your realm fast with supreme foundation but it can't help you control those vast strength please remember to store energy instead of breaking through cultivation realms in future it will be very useful"

"oh...hmm" Nasir agreed what system said is very reasonable because he thinks he hadn't even able to exert one fourth of his potential.

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