The_Wild_Trill
Lol princess vegeta? isn't that going a little bit too far? I mean unless you completely change his apppearanc- let me stop I'm being a hypocrite because mystory has Naruko in it. This is extremely original, I had only seen one other fanfic in history with a female vegeta story, that was a neglected fanfic crossover with Naruto. I haven't read it yet but your story just by the table of contents alone. makes me interested, People as you know this is a gender gender story Of VEGETA, you don't like it .just warning you now this is not for You. Can't wait to see where this story leads.
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Wow, just wow. so basically he can have all the bloodlines and powers of every Anime in the dragonball Universe but he can't have them in the DxD Universe because they don't belong and don't exist there ? that makes absolutly no Sense? naruto bloodlines don't exist in the DB Universe as well but he could still use them . bullshit Nerf Mc
it is a story of wish fulfillment, read-only as a hobby. It is quite evident that the author is new to writing, because of that, I will not discourage you from writing, this is a good novel for beginners. Just enjoy a story with OP character, OP system, half-ass protagonist, and some characters with changed genres.
novel 4,5 star nerf = -1 star system slave: -2 star (the system tells him to sit and he obeys (the system is in charge, he decides where Mc should be and when) the harem is so big that character development doesnβt exist (I know this is normal in harem but here itβs elevated to the tenth power) = - 0,5 star Total star = 1,5
The biggest problem I have is why the f*** is he not letting gine meet female kakarot. why is being such a sissy: and for what stability of plot. if you care about plot then why did you write an alternate universe in which every Main character is female and MC saves his mother and gine when everything is so f***** up why does he care work plot
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