ElisabethSuelli
I have to say, this story is extremely well written. I was originally just going to read a chapter, but it was so interesting that I finished all of the chapters so far. The descriptions and world building are very good and it gives an looking feeling of existential dread that is very compelling. So well done and I hope you'll continue your work
it's really good, the storyline and especially for the unexpected event on how Jane turned. The title is really interesting and kudos to you for that, I think the title makes the people interested in reading your story. The chapters may be short but it's really good, I'm really into a horror story and you're really good. I'm definitely adding to my library. You have so much potential, Keep writing author!
I won't even lie, this is amazing. I'm adding this to my library. I could relate so much to the description because I still get nightmares more than dreams. I know the struggle. The first chapter blew my mind away, Jane's character is great. I hope you write a story about just dream, developing it further with your imagination. Kudos!