The Monkey...

That was a really interesting and funny start. Then it all turns around and the suspense startles you. Great writing. Also, there are some minor spelling errors, some I even commented on. Keep up the great work, Author!

Suspense is very effective in the book, although there are a few grammar mistakes I would fix. Otherwise its a great story that has quite some potential in its plot.

Loved the story, looking forward to more chapters. I wish the author good luck in his endeavors! Thanks for the chapters! [img=update][img=recommend]