Caine_Stark
I'd like to say I'm ashamed to be an author reviewing his own work but I'm not. I just want to say I'm humbled and thank you to all the readers whose comments got me through days when I wasn't sure I'd get a chapter out. The novels just in its infancy right now but I wouldn't be able to keep a daily schedule without all of this feedback and support.
WebnovelCreators101's Review Reading Status: Chapter 2, but it felt like I'd been reading a thousand chapters. The length is perfect. The author has perfect control. And the ending of each chapter... closes on just the right note which leaves me gnawing for more... Writing Quality, 5 Stars, I am lost for words. It is pitch perfect. I noticed one or two typos but it is entirely negligible. The storytelling-style is very favorable. Every time I read a paragraph, a word or two would jump in and surprise me in a glowingly positive way. It deeply Impresses me with every read. Stability of Updates, 5 Stars, after I read the first chapter I was worried if the next chapter would take a long time, and it turns out I was not to worry, because I woke up the very next day to find the second chapter waiting to be read, and I literally squealed. Continued...
Okay, so this is a man that knows how to write. When I clicked on this link in discord, I certainly wasn't expecting something this good. I mean it's the guy's first book, and he's doing an amazing job. I look forward to reading more of your novel in the future. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. There may be only one chapter right now, but I can tell this will be a hit. That's all, thank you for comment ng to my TED Talk. ~ Wolf out
This is amazing, I can't begin to find the words to describe this work but I have to say keep up the good work. The pacing is great as the world slowly unravel its self. Wordings and descriptions are on point as you get to immerse yourself in the character, scene or situation. Sigh, if only web novel would allow some background music that would play as you read...that'd be even better.
First things first, the novels quality. If you enjoy system novels like chrysalis or solo levelling, you'll surely enjoy this novel. One of the authors strong sides is his vocubulary. That's a neat strong side when your story takes place inside of hell(spoiler alert, it does). The novel has darker theme, you won't get your "Reincarnated as a slime" feel from it.
So ive read up to Chapter 10, and I have to say that this novel is quite good compared to many on this sight. It skip** over unneeded nonsense and jumps right into pure and unadulterated violence. So far the writing quality is great, and the plot is steady. Although its still to early to tell, and I would like to see more chapters before I can really decide how good this book will be, id say it had great potential. Great Job author <3
Great book! 11 chapters in and I'm already hooked. This book is hard to fault. The story development is very well-paced and understandable and the writing quality is fantastic. On top of that, the stability of updates seems to be very consistent at the moment. Keep up the good work Author. You've got my support!
Okay, I haven't finished the other chapters, but Bruh, It is amazing, I love the way you write, the details you give and everything. People that are reading the reviews to know if you should read it. I only have one thing to say "Read it if you like the type of weak-starting MC and becoming stronger, this book is amazing, I'm sure it will become one of the best in the future". Please don't ever stop writing this, Keep up the good work!!
This story is really well written. Good vocabulary, excellent grammar, and an exciting story. It is also written in first person which not many authors on this site use. Overall, the chances of this story being at the top are pretty high. I recommend those to read this if they love game-like stories.