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SplendidPuma
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Hello everyone, Author here. I will try my best to write something acceptable but I am a newbie just writing for fun so don’t expect too much from me. I try to release one chapter per day but it is becoming hard to update daily so updates might become irregular at times. It might seem like the plot armor is too thick at times but c’mon, I gave the MC Advanced Luck Glow from The Legendary Mechanic, what do you expect? I don’t know how to write well, there might be plot holes and some s hit, I just write whatever comes to my mind. I may think about killing an important person in the story just for the fun of it, then change my mind the next day for the heck of it. So be prepared for the sudden change of events. I even thought about killing the MC once y’know? But I’m trying to write something fun for the readers so, no killing the MC lol. Well, if you read my comment until now, give the story a try and maybe you will find it fun. If you like the story, write your thoughts in the comment section or in the reviews. Encouragements are always nice and gives me the motivation to continue the story. I may not feel motivated to continue writing if there are only negative comments since that means the story sucks and people mostly find it annoying, so, if you like the story don’t forget to leave a review.
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Average is all I can say, honestly the description of the book threw me off, and I was a bit disappointed. Its just an average story I can find almost anywhere else, I don't know if this world is from overgeared since I did not read the book, but if not, changing the name of a few things and you could get the average experience of an original novel in this website of being stuck inside a game and I could guarantee that you could find books similar to this. I got vibes from that one book that makes the guy an asura and the other where mc gets the sword and it resets his level while sending him to a dark place, the skills are kind of lackluster since most of them are damage multipliers with long cooldowns and the names give me sword god vibes. Honestly I have not read before the rewrite that some person mentioned in the reviews, and I have not read far enough but mostly till chapter 10 but I see no resemblance of what fanfiction is this supposed to be on, because yes this is a fanfiction.
