Read this story long ago came back seeing it updated , but you are gone after just one month please try at least short chapters it's a wonderful story .
Where are you please come back waiting for it it is fantastic story with lot a background and materials don't just go poof!! [img=update] . Please come back please pleaaaaase
Man your story and it's development is fantastic, but the names that are
you copying are quite a lot. l mean just add some of your's as well , otherwise it is fantastic.
KEEP UP WITH THE UPDATES :>
Good beginning keep it up , as I have seen lot of Fanfics either dropped or put on indefinite hiatus.
Well just my suggestion do not make the character being just in few more chapters if you are planning a long fanfic as it just becomes boring .