Update

hey guys still continuing with the story just wanted to see if it was something people would want to read plz comment if you like the story or not it really helps me. I know the beginning was not the greatest as it resembled a certain other alien background but the way I wanted to go with the story was kind of different as Esme being already being older and knowing about her powers and at least knowing she isn't the same as the others on the planet she's going to. also plz comment on things I should change. the way chapter reads will change to as I won't just bunch the sentences together like that makes for a short looking chapter. if all goes well I should have a chapter of out tonight or tomorrow morning.